We were given mainly positive feedback when we showed our trailer to a small group of students, they said that the story was told well and our footage was very good
We were told although there was tension, it needs to be cleverly edited to create a huge climax at the end, this could be done by making the shots shorter and shorter as it came to an end
We were told that our trailer was a good length and enough of the plot was revealed, just the ending needs to be refined to create an impact on the viewer so they will remember it
An idea we were given was to try and make the trailer seem like less of a short film, and more like a conventional movie trailer, this could be done by removing/editing the opening scene, as that is a storytelling device which is used mainly in actual films as opposed to trailers
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